Sunday, May 18, 2008

Sold- 10th Post

Pushpa and her children have been kicked out of the house because she was sick. Lakshmi misses Pushpa and Harish. Harish was such a good friend to her. Many men come and go, but one day an American man comes to visit Lakshmi. Auntie Mumtaz believes that he is just sleeping with her, but the man only talks to Lakshmi. He gives her a card so that she will call him for help. This is a good sign for Lakshmi. Maybe now she can escape from the "Happiness House." She keeps the meeting a secret from Auntie Mumtaz so she will not get in trouble. I believe that Lakshmi will finally be rescued.

1 comment:

Irish said...

Again, a short entry. She goes back and forth over calling this guy. You fail to mention this inner conflict. You also don't mention about the boy street vendor whom she happens to befriend.

I think your posts needed to be a bit longer and more involved with some of the side plots of the story.

Mr. Farrell